Can Somebody rate my Burn Deck?

I'll give it a 5/10, for a good thought...what im saying is u need more stuff to make direct damage, put 3 UFO turtle, backfire, just deserrs, volcanic monsters, and if it is a fire deck that burns make it BURN for realz, put some stuff that are fire that burns and do damage, the best example, i dont know his name but that guy in front of the force of the breaker package