Rate my poem please? forget about 20 lettters?

NO! your rhymes are terrible by any measure. and then is great how you FORCE so many on us, in some sentences then you give up in others. respect-set? me-society? us-us? NICE one! then really give up on light.? how about 'bright'? bet no one has thought of that? or make it easy, just say 'right', that way you don't have to work to hard. anyway. i would throw this in the trash, and then go get a DR.SEUSS book, and start with the basics. cat-hat. sat-mat.